I SHOULD HAVE DONE THIS IN TWO POSTS BUT AH WELL. REPLIES UNDER THE CUT FOR LENGTH
captainsnumple replied to your post “Minako and Haruka, “Everything’s going to be fine” YOU COULD MAKE THIS…”
OHHHH I love this
Ahhh thank you Snumple ❤
I love how Haruka is lying to Mina, and Mina BELIEVES her, or at least doesn’t ask more questions
And that Mina admits that she is scared, but only in whisper
You know, initially when I saw this prompt, I was going to do Haruka dying, but I flipped it because I feel like they’re both prepared for that possibility, as much as they can be. I mean, I don’t think Haruka WANTS to die, but I think if she was told one of them had to die, she’d want it to be her, if that makes sense. And Mina has run through the possibility of all the girls dying in her head so much, she’ll do anything she can to stop it, but she suspects it’s going to happen sooner or later. But I can easily see Haruka letting herself believe Minako (and Michiru) is invincible, because she’s smart and fast and powerful. Mina is just too MUCH to die, she is lively and vibrant and too damn loud for Haruka to be able to imagine a world without her.
I love how Haruka is lying to herself and how she’s imagining other outcomes than Minako’s death
CONFESSION TIME. Even tho I wrote this, and I know Mina is dead BECAUSE I wrote this, part of me has been telling myself the same lies as Haruka. MAYBE SOMEONE DOES FIND THEM, AND CALLS AN AMBULANCE, AND MINA IS VERY HURT AND PROBABLY HAS SPINAL DAMAGE, BUT SHE’S ALIVE AND SHE STAYS ALIVE AND IT’S FINE, SEE.
And I LOVE how your story flows, it feels like misic, and I love the little details, like the one about Mina’s ‘ha!’ or Haruka thinking the redness of the cliff has something to do with nature
It’s SO GOOD, I love it
Ahhhhh thank you so much, I’m blushing.
captainsnumple replied to your post “Michiru and Rei, “Are you flirting with me?"”
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW
SAM I LOVE IT SO MUCH
SNUMPLE AS ALWAYS YOU ARE TOO SWEET
I love that you’ve shown that Michiru sincerely wanted it herself, and Haruka’s race might have been just an excuse
Ahahaha I see two possibilities, either MIchiru NEVER ASKED Haruka, or she guided Haruka into giving her this answer like
“Oh dear, I booked us this spa day but that race you like to watch is on, I’ll have to take someone else”
“What? No, I can go.” (I see Haruka being super into being pampered, plus seeing Michiru look so peaceful)
“No, no, it’s alright, please watch your race”
“I can record it and watch it later! Really!”
“Don’t you want to watch it live? I was thinking of asking Rei.”
“:(((( Fine”
REI’S STRAIGHTFORWARDNESS THOUGH AHAH
SAY BEFORE, THINK AFTER
REI IN A NUTSHELL
I LIKE TO THINK LATER MICHIRU TAKES REI TO HIGH SOCIETY EVENTS JUST TO SEE WHAT SHE’LL SAY AND TO WHOM
I really love how you write them, so in character, like I could tell who is talking just by their phrases
Ahhhh thank you, I’m so glad that I did alright with Rei! I feel like Michiru’s way of speaking is an easier one to capture for me, I “hear” her voice very clearly, but less so with Rei.
NO I REALLY LOVE THAT IT’S SO GOOD
DID I SAY THAT I LOVE IT BECAUSE I LOVE IT
I ALREADY SAID YOU WERE TOO SWEET BUT REALLY. YOU ARE THE KINDEST OF SWEETHEARTS
I’M SWOONING OVER MICHIRU’S THOROUGHLY PLANNED LACK OF CARE
SHE DOESN’T CARE SO MUCH. THERE WERE DEFINITELY NOT SEVERAL SECONDS WHILE WAITING FOR REI’S ANSWER THAT SHE DECIDED FRIENDS WERE OVERRATED AND SHE WAS NEVER TRYING TO MAKE ANY EVER AGAIN. (And she definitely did not feel a strong wave of relief and joy when Rei said yes. Nope, not Michiru, she is above such things)